I actually saw your comment a while ago. I've tried to have more context in some of the caps that came after this one. I think one of the big differences I notice in my writing VS other writers is that the situation of characters talking while swapped is often more interesting to me than how the swap occurred to begin with.
I just saw this. Yes I definitely can agree with that. But still context is kind of important. I did love the characters behaviors but I'd like to know what happened after, if they ever returned at all and what they thought of each other's actions in their bodies. I understand that more of a follow up question but it's easier for me to extrapolate it myself and image the likely aspects including what the reason was. I was left hoping the means would be explained at the end quizzical as read. I tend to like more information. Also my key board is acting up hence my attempt to avoid needing a question mark. It was really good. I could never get the dialogue you do. I appreciate your focus on present actions.
Hahaha messed up but funny. Nice to see you with new stories.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed. Yeah, I really like doing the teasing kind of stories when I get an idea for them.
DeleteWhat caused the swap? It's a good caption but I want a little context about the why.
ReplyDeleteI actually saw your comment a while ago. I've tried to have more context in some of the caps that came after this one. I think one of the big differences I notice in my writing VS other writers is that the situation of characters talking while swapped is often more interesting to me than how the swap occurred to begin with.
DeleteI just saw this. Yes I definitely can agree with that. But still context is kind of important. I did love the characters behaviors but I'd like to know what happened after, if they ever returned at all and what they thought of each other's actions in their bodies. I understand that more of a follow up question but it's easier for me to extrapolate it myself and image the likely aspects including what the reason was. I was left hoping the means would be explained at the end quizzical as read. I tend to like more information. Also my key board is acting up hence my attempt to avoid needing a question mark. It was really good. I could never get the dialogue you do. I appreciate your focus on present actions.
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