LOL Good story. I wonder if the mom & the girl get vvarried away?You might want to consider using easier to read & darker fonts.
I wonder if Grace might also have feelings for the guy - and that's why she's extra frustrated to have her mother in that body. Frustration does make people do silly things...Yeah. I'll be fixing the font in future caps - thicker white outline and probably a bolder font.
Who's the model?