Thursday, 9 May 2019

A Weird Afternoon

I'm going to do a few caps with the story text in bold and the dialogue in italics. Does it read any better than the other way around?


  1. Wickdly funny. I can so many things going wrong. Poor girl, poor dad. s for easier to read. No I don't find it reads better. Looking forward to more

  2. Good story, looking forward to seeing more. As for the text, I didn't find it made things easier, but it did the make things harder. We will see if maybe it is different if you have a dialogue heavy cap where the difference might be more noticeable.